Celebrate with family and friends
Holy nights, the angels will sing to the son of Christ
Rudolph's red nose helped Santa at his time of need
I love the gift of giving to others
Standing under the mistletoe, I love how this goes
Time is also a very precious gift to have
Miracles happens because we hope
A christmas tree, so beautiful and bright
Stars write, a message from Heaven, Merry Christmas
Author notes
Acrostic
christmas
red
merry
angels
holy
hoilday
stars
mistletoe
Rudolph
stand
celebrate
christmas tree
miracle
gift
A contest entry
- Allpoetry Kids Christmas Bash 2008 (win a gold membership) by Little Eagle.
4200 points, ended January 11, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a lovely acrostic poem
I like the way you have focused on the positives of Christmas in this poem - especially in the line about time being precious - a beautiful sentiment
Merry Christmas!
Polly
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A very nice poem already, but it could even be better when you had not used so many words from the wordbank. Five were already enough. The more words you choose the harder you make it for yourself.
For instance: in the first line it would have been better when you had used celebration instead of celebrate, for Christmas is a celebration of family and friends. Next to that you should try to make a little story about Christmas. Have another look, I am sure you can make this poem better. Good luck.
Anna.
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Stars write, a message from Heavan, Merry Christmas..........
What a BEAUTIFUL end line to a wonderful poem. Keep on writing young poet, your talent shows! Great job and good luck in the contest!
ps - your last two lines have tiny litte spelling errors if you want to edit a fix in, look at HEAVEN and BEAUTIFUL.
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