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Cold Hearted.

If i gave you the world, youd accept it. And youd break my heart.
If i gave you my word, youd beleive me, and youd kill my soul.
If i asked for your love, and you agreed-youd make my life unravel.
Its just these simple things that make me fall apart.
Its just these simple things that reveal a cold heart.

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Well, here is a short poem I wrote a while ago but I really like it!

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  • AlmostLover
    January 22
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    I like this. Short, but with lots of emotion.
    Nice write ♥