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Burghers of Calais

Heroic in the face of fate,
nooses cinched about the nape,
ransomed at the city's gate,
sackcloth their adorning drape.

Bearing keys to England's King,
the six against a town compared.
Bad omens that their death may bring,
thus the burghers' lives were spared.

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  • The Fun House silver member
    December 14, 2008

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    I'm not a huge fan of rhyme unless it is well done and this is very well done. It is not forced and keeps the flow of thoughts well. Excellent job here.