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Pain is love, love is pain
there is some-thing to learn
from this game that we all play to
win.

Pain is pain and love is love
so we tell each other for a life
worth keeping in control.

But what do we really know about
love is war and  pain is the battle field
for that quest that we all share-in to hold and to
talk about it.

So when the life that now know is over
what do we do for this next part that we
are doin.

Do we pick up the from where left off from
or start the next chapter with a new slate
that we all need like a second chance that so
much seek out for.

Tell me what do we really know about pain and
the things that i hides and show us ?

Author notes

is there anything in life that pain told us about ourself

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pain is what

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  • this is pretty good...and it's thwe last poem I gotta read for the contest! I'm through! I do really like the poem...good luck!
    Alicia Lynn

  • cindy4
    December 6, 2008
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    Great write