Formless
void
Leaving lips cold
and split to bleeding
Anguish
is a free zone
with no parking
Dictionary
does no good
I, looking in
mirror
with silver filigree
edging
In a list
A contest entry
- lack of definition by going nowhere.
700 points, ended December 7, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell me what you think, but kindly, please.
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Bravo!
This is a great write for this Contest!
It certainly fits the definition of formless. This leaves me with a chilling feeling of formlessness! I feel a stark emptiness now & it's creepy! I need some Java perk. 
Sure you'll so well with this write. 
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i felt cold and empty when i finished reading this... wondering where i was heading in life... well done with the prompt. thank you
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I really like what you've done here. There's a chilling absence of definition which perfectly defines "lack of definition." I hope that makes sense!
Good work,
Bill
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You've definitely spoken to the prompt with this stark, bleak write Sherry. Good work.
Paul
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hmmm, interesting. I get a sene of complete emptiness when I read this piece. Void says it all. Good luck to you in the contest.
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