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Don't Be Gentle

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I don't want to see your gentle side
I want to barter tonight
My wet kitty kat I'll provide
For your hard piece I want inside

I won’t be gentle, girl I know you like it rough
you’re so sexy that I will never get enough
When I bang you it will sound like a parade
My hard piece for your kitty kat, that’s an even trade

I'm on all fours your in control
Saddled up for the boisterous ride
Waiting to polish your gigantic pole
With my lips between my chocolate thighs

Face down ass up, I love that position
Between your chocolate thighs lies my intention
I let your lips polish my pole as I enter your hole
With every stroke to your ego you loose control

I want to buck beyond control
While you go deep inside
Spank me on my firm ass
Make my heated walls cry
Get my tight pussy off
And then drink from my trough

Your firm ass and thick thighs have me losing my mind
I drill deeper and deeper; you scream you’re going blind
You’re bucking like a bronco while I’m tapping your ass pronto
Your sugar walls cry candy rain but I lost my poncho
So I retrieve my pole and let my face feel your shower
Open my mouth so I can taste your sweet power
You’ve quenched my thirst but I must come back soon
Baby I loved the sweet drink from your saloon

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • EvansV
    July 17
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    wow i love this one

    theres a lot of reading i have to catch up on very powerful


  • Swan song gold member
    December 27, 2008
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    Blood pressure pills were are they?
    Wow one hot tamale of a poem

  • New-n-Improved
    December 15, 2008

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    Very Intense

    This is hot! I need you right now. This poem sounds like something from the Vagina Monologues. You should try entering this poem in a contest. I'm sure it would win the gold trophy and maybe other things as well.
    This poem is explosive and dripping with hot sex from beginning to end. Don't stop your writing and I won't stop reading.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    December 8, 2008

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    GAWD!!

    Wow! very very intensely heated you two!! excellent, now I uhmm..got go uhm..check on something..


  • Desire gold member
    December 6, 2008

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    OH MY WORD!!

    Holy Mother of Pearl Jam~
    at first I was like...these reads like a collab a back and forth me-...
    I was too busy staring at the picture and got lost in the translation~ Oy!!!
    Too hot for television-
    well maybe could be put on YouTube
    You know for educational purposes
    j/k
    Love this in an Innocent way of course!!
    Excellent Collab
    -walks into wall-
    Thank You for sharing Your Heat and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You Both
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • darell
    December 6, 2008

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    Hell's Yeah!

    Yippy yeah! Yippy Yi! Coyote!!!
    WOW! I loved this shit. Mannnnn!
    Homeboy road the hell out of dat ass.lol
    Now this is how you write an erotic poem.
    I felt that shit and the photo intensifies
    the visuals. Way to go you all!!!lol


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    December 6, 2008

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    Nice job on the collaboration. It is highly erotic. The fast paced rhythm adds to the tempo of the poem.

    Great job.

    Mike


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    December 6, 2008

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    you two metephors in this was nasty nice i like this poem poem a whole lot this was nice sex from you both a pleasre honies


  • Maxboy gold member
    December 5, 2008

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    Wow, this is so good, good thing it's cold where I am. I can step outside and sizzle in the cold, damn I'm making fog. I also liked the humor side to the story.

    Hot One More More


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 5, 2008

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    This is SO HOTTTTT!
    Lovely collaboration between the two
    of you. I love the imagery and naughtiness
    in this one! LOL! Well done and I think I'll
    go jump in a cold pool now! Thanks for
    sharing this one here!




    Jeremy0826


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 5, 2008

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    OOOOOOOKKKKKKKKKay, i am oging to just say good poem while i take a long cold shower and then take a long walk in the snow with a towel on to cool down some, keep it flowing


  • penman gold member
    December 5, 2008
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    Wow!

    Oh my another scorcher you have as a collab. so very hot. This was great.

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