Merry Christmas everyone!!!
Icy snowflakes fall from the sky
Some on the ground, some up high
Toys from St. Nick under the tree
Little angels we all can see
Eggnog we gulp right down our throat
Together we go caroling in our coats
Our joy can be spread around the world
Every wish sent to all boys and girls
A contest entry
- Allpoetry Kids Christmas Bash 2008 (win a gold membership) by Little Eagle.
4200 points, ended January 11, 24 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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I also believe in Father Christmas,
I look to the sky with excited eyes.
Unwrap the bow and tear up the paper
and get your big surprise!
Hope you had a merry Christmas!
Very nice writing jennypennykenny!
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I love it
Spirit of christmas as it should be
keep up the great work
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This is a beautiful poem of Christmas time
I like the way you have told a story through the acrostic, and even used the words from the wodbank without making this seem forced at all lovely poem!
Merry Christmas!
Polly
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Sweet
You did a beautiful job, it makes me excited for Christmas.
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Wow!
This is wonderful! You have a special talent young one. Very, very awesome writing! Merry Christmas!
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This is just amazingly good. Wordbank, Acrostic and rhyme... all in one poem. And it even tells a story of Christmas. You did a great job.
Good luck in the Contest.
Anna.
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Lovely. Everything so true in this poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Brian -
Great poem you bumpess. And I Love Eggnog Puss.
And Grandma says this poem is awsome!
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good poem do you like eggnog?
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This is the coolest acrostic ever! You did great, good luck in the contest and keep those poems a flowin' !!!!
(and I doubt you will like eggnog as much as Dr. Pepper! )
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Beautiful sentiments...
even about the eggnog...hope you enjoy lots and lots of it this year...I bet you will love it as much as Dr. Pepper.
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