Blessed is she that was chosen by God, to bear His only son,
The Virgin Mary, mother of Jesus Christ, my Holy savior.
Pure as new fallen snow, saying yes, she didnt run,
teaching her Son well about Godly behavior.
Growing to be a remarkable couragious man,
healing sick, afflicted with laying on of His hand.
Spreading the word of His father across the land,
fighting evil, showing others how to make a stand.
Celebrated by Christmas in this modern age,
commercial and monetary it's lost it's appeal.
Barely mentioned, is histories greatest sage,
I believe the Mother Mary and Jesus are real.
An Angel appeared to Mary and she answered yes,
now she is in heaven and she is very blessed
Author notes
Love you Tory.
The closing couplet was written by the contest holder.
Hence the collaboration.
In a list
A contest entry
- The Virgin Mary by Violinstrings.
650 points, ended December 20, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Beautiful write here
So true are your words and we so need to get the spirit of christmas back and leave the material christmas behind for what you give of yourself is far more importand than anything you could ever buy
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I like this, Scott.
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this is good
very beautifully written even though you quoted me
it is not my own words it came from a priest's gospel -
yes it is good
it is worth sharing with us on this sight
and wonderful rhyming
and ideas
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