Because my brother is wacky
Really he is so silly
Oh sometimes I feel like hitting him
Together we are a team
He is the silliest guy I know
Even when he makes me mad I still
Really still love him so
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a poem in 10 lines or less (B) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended December 14, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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All siblings are like that!
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Very creative and quite a cute piece. I do have brothers myself and can relate to this whole heartedly. Excellent acrostic
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Oh Brother
Brothers can be pains in the fanny sometimes. This is a good free write. I can really see how your feeling.
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Haha....
Funny ... Very sweet poem, little one. Keep up the great work.
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I like it!
Because I love my Holly!!
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Something just about everyone with siblings can relate to. Believe me, you're not the only one with this feeling. Anyway I enjoyed this. Honest and right to the point. Thanks for sharing.
Brian -
My favorite line in this is "together we are a team..." I always wished I had a brother or sister...its wonderful that despite the occasional desire to hit him you can admit that you really love him....he is lucky to have a sister like you, and your lucky to have him.
Sweet poem.
Great job and keep writing little poet!
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Silly huh?
Yeah he is, but he's so darn cute though...Good to know you still love him, even though you want to hit him...you might not wanna do that though...Santa is watching.
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Grandma and Grandpa love your poem and your brother is Silly.
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