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Nude Pain

She cries alone
Naked,
upon ruby red sheets,
Bleeding, burning,
from the chemo therapy for her
cancer,
She knows as love,
Oh how it throbs of pain in her heart,
but she needs it to live
She loathes the misery it brings,
but wants the life it gives
Her tresses cover her face,
shall never disguise what she’s really feeling.

A contest entry

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  • chilali
    December 14, 2008

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    Oh wow. This was original. Thanks for your entry and best of luck to you in my contest

    Much love
    Ylova


  • UnManned4Ever
    December 7, 2008

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    This is really good and shows how the poor person that is going through the opain of cancer and chemo is feeling. Well done! :