God help me
To see through this beauty
This woman has blinded me
Of all of my surroundings
She has taken my mind
Placed it solely on her
I cannot think
But of her grace
I cannot speak
But of her majesty
I cannot breath
With her at my side
This feeling is overwhelming
And she is to blame
I must be crazy
For feeling this way
For she is the light
Of my every day
I cannot complain
For she is perfection
Maybe it was you after all
Who made me this way
Was it you
Who brought her to me?
Forever grateful
Is what I shall be
Thank you god
For all you have done
I know now why I am blinded
For my search is through
You have given me all I need
God help me
To hold on
For this beauty
Is one i wish never to fade
Author notes
Option 1 Jake0715
'Tired eyes rarely see a good future.'
A contest entry
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beautiful... I love this, well done.
peace.
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I love it!
Wow you are like realy good!
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Oh love through the eyes
a love granted and blessed by God, is perfection and Our Lords best! thank you for entering in the contest!
Blessings
Rend
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Well this sounds like the real deal. Very elagantly put and sweet in its honest sincerity. Most worthy of clappies.
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this is beautiful. i envy girls who have poetry written for them. it must be a great feeling. your poem was very hearfelt. thank you so much for sharing this piece.
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I'll write a poem for youuuu XD
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awww
...this is beautiful
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This is soooo beautiful, I love the emotion, devotion, it's amazing. Thank you for entering.
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Good. Love rule followers. Will comment for real later.
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aww, wow, this is soo beautiful, i love the powerful emotional feelings of love and devotion in here. good luck and thanks for entering
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thank you =] im glad you liked it
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Hly moly. Again, beautiful write! This is so loving, and so beautiful. Beautifully penned dear poet.
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great
This is written very well. I like this.
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