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Wound - Gold

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Ringlets wound
round
pointer finger

spun silver
on tomboy’s head

full of bows
and arrows







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  • penman gold member
    December 6, 2008
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    Excellent

    Very creative and so well expressed. Congratulations on the gold


  • Lavender Butterfly
    December 6, 2008
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    how creatively grasping... x


    • CarolDesjarlais silver member
      December 6, 2008
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      Thank you, gypsy Butterfly. I was a tomboy, much to my mother's chagrin.


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    December 5, 2008

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    aww...this is beautiful and cute and I really like this!

    good luck


  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    December 5, 2008

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    Oh how perfect! Gotta have the arrows to balance out the bows, huh? Just adorable.

    Love the pic!


    • CarolDesjarlais silver member
      December 6, 2008

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      Funny how the soul knows...no matter the color of hair...and what a sorrow it was to my mother - both tomboy and that.


  • fortyninereasons
    December 5, 2008
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    lovely reflection here.
    Juls


  • Cannonsfire
    December 5, 2008

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    Oh I can see that in you so clearly lol I wonderful description C


  • moon2u
    December 5, 2008
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    Now who is that blonde in ringlets?

    hmmh

    applause

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