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[ Together forever ]

Together forever
in our hearts
Looking for our dreams together.
This way,
Now that way.
Years has brought us closer to each other,
For our dreams,
For our future,
To begin.

Ours stars start to mend as one,
For all the world to see.
Our stars we created,
Will shine,
Shine orver us,
Over our family,
Over all to see.
For our future together now.

All the fun times.
The happy times,
We had together.
The sad,
The scared ties
We shared,
Has come to an end,
I will as you will remeber all the times we had.
As our careers start we with merge with others to become one with them,
and we will split  to be with them.
But we will still shine as one forever as time goes on.


Author notes

so its finished and its about my class this year. we had tough time we had fun times.
but the year is over and now we are splitting up to do our own thing. though they will not read this i will still write.

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  • fatty
    June 9
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    Nice =]


  • upperworld06
    March 23

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    what kind of class was it? i really like the last line, leaves you with hope even though everyones going their own ways. thanks for entering


  • robynsapoet
    March 4
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    love it


  • yehsung
    December 21, 2008

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    I like this one. It's like a poem and lyrics. I found myself trying to sing the lyrics Ahhh but my vocal skills fail XD

    When reading this poem, I thought it was about a person as well. But, then I read your authors note, and then I found out it was about your class. It's a cute poem, one that shows that no matter how much time passes, the memories don't fade, and the care everyone shows for one another won't go away.

    <3


    • kel dog
      December 21, 2008
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      yeah i cant sing either. so its kinda hard writing these.

      thanks for the read.


  • insanemike
    December 7, 2008

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    now this is really good but if u didnt put the author notes in i wouldve thought it was about 1 person in particular


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    December 6, 2008
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    It's lovely.

    Nice expression of these feelings.

  • kel dog
    December 5, 2008
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    its finished.

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