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Kitty and I

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The cat looked up at me with green contriving eyes
I knew the mischief brewing in his head
He’d tried it all before and I knew his crafty scheme
Was to see me on his dish and somewhat dead

He looked me in the eye with that look I seen before
He was thinking things he should not think of me
I sat here feeling wary cause that cat was rather scary
He was plotting how to get me for his tea

So I did a little hop - and I chirped a little bit
Cause I figured that I hadn’t none to lose
I flapped a little wing then I flapped a little more
I had to wake that puppy from his snooze

Then the kitty started coming – he was coming really fast
He was ready for the leap into the air
How I thought my days were over but protective little Rover
Caught him mid flight and had swiped him fair and square

Little kitty tumbled over and he landed by the wall
And he shrieked as Rover thundered cross the floor
He went scatting through the room with Rover on his tail
And I heard him screech and spit and shriek some more

And I sit here on my swing feeling good about myself
And I sing a song and dance so happily
Till the next time kitty tries to eat me with his eyes
and considers how I’d taste to be his tea

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  • Ann45 gold member
    March 2
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    ha ha the image is just great. thanks hun it was great


  • Wolfdog silver member
    December 19, 2008

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    Superb plus

    A very fine humorous write, indeed. Imagery; rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us.

    • condor gold member
      December 19, 2008
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      Thank you, mate. Glad that you liked this one.


  • UnManned4Ever
    December 8, 2008

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    This is cute and a great story. Got to love how animals are so protective of their owners. i ahve two english bullfogs and they are both so lovable. Go Rover! Great job once more


    • condor gold member
      December 11, 2008
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      Once again, i thank you for reading my poems. I love your comments. Did you mean you have two bulldogs or bullfrogs? LOL!!!! I'm guessing Bulldogs, but one never knows what lovely pets are out there.


  • Beret55 silver member
    December 6, 2008
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    You are such a great story teller. and your rhyme is always great. another well writen poem.

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    December 6, 2008
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  • rbruce gold member
    December 5, 2008

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    That bird is as shrewd as the kitty. Beautifully done speaking in the first person of the bird. Just a touch of humour as well.


    • condor gold member
      December 6, 2008
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      Thanks, Bob. Appreciated. I will have a look at these things you suggested. It was just a quickie i whipped up after watching a cat and bird eyeing each other.


  • DolceVito gold member
    December 5, 2008

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    LMAO

    Awesome write. Again your speaker is a creature other than human. I like that.


    • condor gold member
      December 6, 2008
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      Thanks, mate. I tend to like seeing things from the animals point of view. I appreciate your comments very much.


  • Nicada silver member
    December 5, 2008

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    LOL..this is so darn cute, and I love how you have brought this beautiful bird to life. Very entertaining and enjoyable write! Blessings, Patty


    • condor gold member
      December 6, 2008
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      Hi, Patty. I don't know if i replied to you before. If i didn't, i would like to thank you for your comments and for reading.


    • condor gold member
      December 5, 2008
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      Thanks, mate. Just wrote this a couple of days ago when i was watching a bird and cat eyeing each other off. Your comments are appreciated.

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