I've been held captive by my own desire to love ,
thus my soul has been set ablaze by the fire of scorn,
yet, I remain loyal , and sadness' no more than a lapsing thought.
How love radiated through the darkness like a midnight star
has left me speechless, it assured and insurred me as I
breathlessly succumbed to the affection of her moonbeam.
I escaped a world of misery and treasure-hunted her heart,
through her eyes and smiles, I've spiritually found myself,
like a child nursing from his mother's soothing breasts, I've fed.
With every french kissed, her lips, so sweet, left me with a bliss
that even in my masculinity, I could not resist of her sensuality.
Our bed is made of angelical feathers, if we were to sleep;
life would remember us as an intimacy...
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A contest entry
- Seduce My Senses With Words Of Silken Beauty. by Poetryintheblood.
550 points, ended January 8, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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very heart felt
This is well written great imagry, and nice flow. I found you from the other site though I am on AP as well. thanks Friend Nic
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Lovely write here
I so enjoyed this poem and its magical way that love can be the journey that heals the soul and enlighten our pathway to joy -
Thank you for your beautifully penned entry, and one I can relate to of sort, good luck in my contest, Josie
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God you do romance so well mack... I love your love poems, you know that. Thank you for sharing this one! It's so beautiful bursting forth with the feelings of love we all long to embrace and experience!
peace and love
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This was sexy. as an intimacy...
like a child nursing from his moother's soothing breast, I've fed..meaning you fed or you drink...
but I am so in awe with the firt line I've been held by my own desire to love. It feelts just like me as if I can't deny of this powerful mostrous thing but not a monster for a monster represents of somethings scary and enormous but its rather scary to me though it provide with none.
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A write of love, yearning and passion....Amidst all your expressions of love...the satifaction you find with her as a "child nursing from his mother's soothing breasts", angel feather bed and all...It is your dream you have lived...Beautiful write!
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This is soft and seductive, yet it has an edge of pain, almost like a wanton desire that is only met in your musing thoughts. Oft' times love brings about a sense of insecurity, especially when it not returned in a adequate fashion. Your words are expressed with great passion. The poem itself is heartfelt and beautiful. Love is an extreme emotion and you have captured the very essence of the word.
BEAUTIFUL!
Much Love Always ♥
Mom
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Very good write here
Written very well and with such depth of the love shared and yes often if life was lived and felt the same as the pleasure what a world it would be
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Ah "the affection of her moonbeam.." that is intimacy, indeed. What a phrase to set this off....awesome!
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That's precious Mackintoch, you've stunned me with this great beauty.
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