she smiles behind green,
almost cat-like eyes. I
always wondered if the
world seemed more brighter,
if it was even more green on
the other side?
dance is one of her greatest passions.
every move, every step perfectly
choreographed as an expression of who
she really is, an expression of the beauty
in our world and the perfection that
we each can achieve.
this girl is an amazing friend.
she always listens to anything
I have to say and whenever I’m
down she helps me overanalyze
every little situation, and in the end
bad always ends up changing to good,
and happiness always overcomes pain.
it’s those little things like weekends, dance,
cuddling, chick flicks that always bring
about the most perfect moments,
and the unspoiled memories.
a truly wonderful person, who cares
not only about herself. she’s one of those people
that make me want to stay alive. and I just want to say
thank you, and I’ll bandage your heart if you will ever need it.
Author notes
by emma [mesmerized--x]
for my amazing friend, Jane. 
- Rhythm Children contest: prompt rhythm.
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Option 7:
Write a poem about or to your best friend.
In a list
A contest entry
- The Rhythm Children Contest by catalyst..
950 points, ended December 10, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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awww this is so sweet
u never finished the one about me
im sad about that.
dance is one of her greatest passions.
every move, every step perfectly
choreographed as an expression of who
she really is, an expression of the beauty
in our world and the perfection that
we each can achieve.
that's beautiful.
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love you
and love this
thank youuu xoxox
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'a truly wonderful person, who cares
not only about herself. she’s one of those people
that make me want to stay alive. and I just want to say
thank you, and I’ll bandage your heart if you will ever need it.'
This is really good. I love how your can write happy poems and still have so much imagery and metaphors in it
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it's SO hard for me to write happy poems.. this is honestly one of the few.
i try to make all the poems that i write about/for people to be happy.. dont wanna write anythign sad about them cause that would suck aha
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hah. yes that might be taken the wrong way lol.
I know, everytime I sit down and try to write a happy poem I just get frustrated and end up writing a frustrated poem lol.
but this is very good
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it’s those little things like weekends, dance,
cuddling, chick flicks that always bring
about the most perfect moments,
and the unspoiled memories.
awhh
bestfriends
cute
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This is beautiful.You should be very proud of this.Like the color choice,your choice of title and the care you chose in writing this,
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