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January love

Congratulations
I can almost image
You proposing
To the girl of your dreams

That grin
Those soft eyes
Alight with excitement

I hope it was perfect
I hope the lighting was just right
I hope it was fairytale like
The prince has found his princess

He had a run in
Almost followed
The nameless girl
Out of the story forever

Congratulations
January love
I am the beautiful
But lowly girl
The prince was with before

I hope there where fireworks
And the world applauded
I hope it was a memorie
That will remain with you always

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  • JaydinC
    December 10, 2008

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    love it

    this was beautiful, I love the way it was written. I love how it seems like the character is sacrificing her feelings so the object can be happy. love it, well done