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did you get my message, the one I left?

You gotta know just how I feel:

I know a girl with the golden touch
[when are you gonna come down]
what do you see when you're inside the stars...

You seem to need a lot of me
I'm not a perfect person,
you aren't allowed to say that you are better

Every man I fall for drinks his coffee black,
ok is alright with me some things were just meant to be.
I kinda thought that I'd be better off by myself
One question, what can't be done?

Dear Prudence, won't you come out to play?
If I had eyes in the back of my head
you talk too much.
I know what you're doing, I see it all too clear
I've forgot-ton what it feels like to feel normal

I wouldn't know what to do with another chance
Lovers, keep on the road your on
everything moves so fast I should know it won't last.
Lucy was 7 and wore a head of blue barettes

Did you get my message, the one I left?


Author notes

1.Boys Who Love Girls by the Rosebuds
2.Golden Touch by Razorlight
3.Goodbye Yellow Brick Road by Keane ft Fautline(originally by Elton John)
4.Open Eyes by The Apples in Stereo
5.Clingwrap by Sam Sparro
6.The Reason by Hoobstank
7.Mirror Kissers by The Cribs
8.Every Man I Fall For by The Cold War Kids
9.9.Ok, It's Alright With Me by Eric Hutchinson
10.Spoiled by Joss Stone
11.I'm Waiting by The All-American Rejects
12.Dear Prudence by The Beatles
13.If I Had Eyes by Jack Johnson
14.Something To Believe In by Aqualung
15.Barely Breathing by Duncan Sheik
16.I'm Shakin' by Rooney
17.The Ways Things Are by Fiona Apple
18.Lovers in Japan/Reign of Love by Coldplay
19.Someone Something by Spoon
20.No Regrets by Aesop Rock
21.Did You Get My Message by Jason Mraz



I actually had fun with this contest, I was able to listen to songs I haven't heard in awhile.

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  • Mistressofthedark
    December 10, 2008
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    this has to be one of my favorites!


  • Immortal Obscurity Greeters member
    December 9, 2008

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    Well done, darlin' Unlike my entry, this actually makes a bit of sense Well done & good luck


  • Play Pretend.
    December 8, 2008

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    Haha, nice.
    It's funny how these turn out, isn't it?
    Parts of this flowed really well, and almost seemed
    like they could be part of a poem.
    And than other parts.... :}


  • ScottishPrincess silver member
    December 7, 2008

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    Hey Sishow are ya,so good to see ya
    I really think this is great and I had fun reading it
    Read my new poems,Love ya,Hazel


  • BlackSwan
    December 5, 2008
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    B-B-B-B-B-B-B-BIANCA WOAH WOAH WOAH
    I MISS U! D:

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