I used to live my life
Just to fall asleep
I spent all my days
Longing for the night
You were the boy of my dreams
You lived only in my sleep
But I never felt so awake
As I did when I was with you
I don't know why you left me
I waited for your return
But now my sleep is just sleep
And I'm forced to wake alone
Author notes
Wrote this for the "lack of sleep" contest...
A contest entry
- lack of sleep by written-in-ink.
700 points, ended December 6, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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awww
so sad
but i know how this feels
the 1st stanza is very nice
thank you and good luck -
wow, i love this, it is simply amazing, i wrote a poem with a stanza in it similar to this. it was a happy one though. great job. i loved it.
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