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My Shadow's

So, so you think you can tell Heaven from Hell
Now you've got something to die for
You don't mean it
Ziggy played guiltar

Waking from his eyes
Agent Orange Skies hang bright
Well ya got me workin' so hard lately
Set me off like dynamite

The lunatic is on the grass
Our knives say "we're making way for this, the ending."
Pressed the seven sequenced silver panic buttons

Take a souvenir and stop your staring
See the animal in his cage that you built
It's colder than before

I wrote the words to this song on the back of a photograph
In the face of change
A groan of tedium escapes me

There was crust in the metal shell
Once there was boy who had vibrant glow
Well it's happening

Author notes

This sounded fun, so I had to give it a try. Songs are:

"Wish You Were Here", Pink Floyd
"Now You've Got Something to Die for", Lamb of God
"You'll Rebel to Anything (As Long as it's not Challenging)", Mindless Self Indulgence
"Ziggy Stardust", David Bowie
"Dancing Alone", Ours
"Agent Orange Skies", Kill Hannah
"Ringfinger", Nine Inch Nails
"Worth Dying For", Rise Against
"Brain Damage", Pink Floyd
"Murderotica", Norma Jean
"Punch Drunk Punk Rock Romance", Everytime I die
"Nazi Halo", Jack off Jill
"Right Where it Belongs", Nine Inch Nails
"Beloved", VNV Nation
"Armageddon", Alkaline Trio
"Everchanging" Rise Against
"The Patient", Tool
"Lamb of God", Marilyn Manson
"The Boy Who Destroyed the World", AFI
"Me, I'm Not", Nine Inch Nails

Title was "Forty-Six & 2", Tool.

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    April 1

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    Well written
    Gives not just the lyrical thoughts but the fun of music
    Best wishes to you
    Julie


  • Tigerblood
    December 27, 2008
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    Awesome

    Nicely done.. good picks


  • Sandi Alford gold member
    December 8, 2008
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    This turned out pretty well, great song list!
    best wishes!

    blessings, Sandi

  • Diriangeny
    December 5, 2008
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    Very nice poem... and I loved the music taste...