I've always loved the word 'pixel' because
that's what we all are. Tiny dots. You, me, everyone. And
I wrote a few people a letter... just to say hello. But I
wish I'd spent more time looking at this amazing sky. I never noticed
how beautiful it was before! I guess I was too busy
living. So does that mean that when I'm seeing it,
I'm being busy dying?
Author notes
Option 1: Famous Last Words.
A contest entry
- FAMOUS LAST WORDS AMONG A MIX OF OTHER OPTIONS by badnovocaine.
900 points, ended December 22, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great question
and observance. I think we don't see many great things in this life till it's too late! Good luck in the contest! The Shaker
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The ending was such a powerful statement, it was kind of like a statement/question wrapped up into itself, and I liked that about this write. And I guess it just goes to show that we don't stop to admire things that should be admired for it's beauty and intelligence, we don't know what we have until it's gone. I liked this, thank you for entering.
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