Here we are in the middle of the night.
When I rolled over my hand touched her inner thighs.
A soft moan from what I hear.
I work my way between her legs, then move my body near.
Kissing her neck then sliding my hands down her sides.
The enjoyment of pleasing a woman is what I take in such pride.
Moving around in ever direction that we came to mind.
Once we reach that point, I never want to stop this loving kind.
Author notes
JackReed3....... Your friend in poetry...
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- !!!!*Making Love Intensely*!!!! by ForeverLastingComa.
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Comments
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This is very sweet, I especially like the last line,
"Once we reach that point, I never want to stop this loving kind."
I think it was a litle to straight to the point, I felt that it needed a little bit more to it. All in all, though, I liked it very much. I think this was very sweet.
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