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Naughty but nice

I’m not gonna lie
I’ve tied the knot
And inadvertently
Made a noose. I
Was wondering if
You could get it
Loose.

Call after 9am

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  • Swangrnv gold member
    December 10, 2008
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    l.o.l.

    very amusing in a 'tightly' held way!

    • koala
      December 10, 2008
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      ‘Thghtly held’ I’m intrigued?


  • DolceVito gold member
    December 8, 2008
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    Clever

    LMAO. Very good take on the prompt.

    • koala
      December 10, 2008
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      Thanks for taking the time to read my poem. Look forward to reading some more of your work.


  • EmeraldDreams
    December 6, 2008
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    Lol! Fun piece, thank you for the entry

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