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Haiku



tender snowflake
lands silently upon
the mountain lily.

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  • individuality gold member
    June 9

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    a good piece of poetry penned, ah higher up yes, a flake or maybe even two will flutter down to say hi to a flower.


  • DogFish silver member
    December 13, 2008
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    more zen than that!

    ...and we all go to Nirvana!!!


  • Simply Olivia
    December 5, 2008
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    Nice


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 5, 2008

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    i like haikus, you did a great job on this, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest. wonderfully done.