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Alone

The thoughts rush through my head,
As I try to figure out what went wrong
The truth came out,
And no one chose to accept it
The tears of sadness washed my mascara away,
But the truth of love never washes away,
So I try to keep the faith,
Hold onto what I have good,
Instead of focusing on the bad.
Got to keep my head up tall,
And look in through my reflection
I like what is there.

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  • eternalsol
    December 7, 2008
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    nice i feel this way some times i like what you did what the pic thanx so much for entering