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Of what may be, and whatnot

Thinking of a sunshine, that was never, ever mine.
{a soul shines, darkness begone it says}
long sought, it's journey a thing
to see if it still can feel
{rejoices in the memory of what it will become}
it will let me know...

Author notes

armor
hiddenspaces
brackets indicate non-sentient thought

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  • Lost In Dreaming
    January 12

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    lol really now...
    first off im mad that im not on ur page as ur lover anymore...
    Great write though i have a feeling that i read the first line like 30sec ago... I love it once again.

    ♥ meg

    ok...im over it


  • iamlost gold member
    December 9, 2008

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    Wow. This is amazing. Every word fits and makes a powerful poem, these words stay in my mind and beg me to read them again.
    Well penned,
    ~lost


  • LoveLikePoetry
    December 5, 2008

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    Short, but written nicely
    I like it, very much.
    Thanks for entering, and good luck!

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