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A Bee to the Flower



To me you are a beautiful flower
giving your sensuality into my eyes.
I have never seen something so clear
I desire to run my fingers through your strands
I can tell you skin is smooth and soft
as you feed the flames of my desire

You are a woman that is made for desire
Your young face bears the purity of a flower.
Next to you I can feel your breath soft
and I can see excitement within your eyes.
I take in the aroma of your silky strands.
I can’t hide my passion when my heart beats so clear.

Gazing into your eyes it is clear
that you were made for something deeper desire.
I vision us loving upon a misty strand
as you open to me like a flower.
I wish you could see from my eyes
what I see under your skin so soft.

Whisper in my ear crooning soft.
Let me take in your words sensual and clear.
Then show me what you want with your eyes.
Lead me into your abyss of desire.
I will be gentle as if touching a flower
losing myself within your silky strands.

I run my hands through your strands
and sigh in the sensations of silky and soft.
Tears of joy fall like petals of a flower
flowing from deep passionate eyes fair and clear.
Your heart undulates from virgin desire.
I can see it swelling form within your eyes

Only truth can come from such eyes
In them your soul is naked upon a strand.
You are more than any man can desire
I want to fill your life with kisses soft
Show you a love in a way that is clear
as clear to you as an opening flower.

I gaze deep in your eyes into your soul warm and soft.
Upon this strand our love is shown clear.
I explode with desire. A bee to the flower.



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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 5, 2008

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    you are one of the best my friend, you did a great job on this, i loved it, keep it flowing and good in the contest


  • ForeverLastingComa
    December 5, 2008

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    I liked this piece very much I love the way you copare things to your feelings. I did feel that you used a flower to much and saying strand to much. All in all it was very sweet. My favorite lines were,

    "I run my hands through your strands
    and sigh in the sensations of silky and soft.
    Tears of joy fall like petals of a flower
    flowing from deep passionate eyes fair and clear.
    Your heart undulates from virgin desire.
    I can see it swelling form within your eyes"

    Thank You for entering and good luck