I'm drinking you up inch by inch
Eyeing your nipples I long to pinch
That ice-coffee skin, smooth black hair
You spread wide for me without a care
Your honey-thick butterfly calling my name...
Slick with juices, all my domain
Like my own sticky lollipop, its your bud I crave
Shrieking in orgasm, I make you behave
Writhing and bucking, a live rodeo show
In one little suckle your sweet juices flow
Drenching my lips, I bathe in your cum shower
Limp as a doll you submit to the power
Of rough, kneading hands and tiny love bites
Naughty little kitten in your soaked red tights
Peeling them down, I'm making you plead
But your pussy starves for my creamy seed
We're making raw love in the pale moonlight
The quiver of your tits is a marvelous sight
Bouncing freely, nails clawing my back
I reward your hunger with a hard, solid smack
When bedsprings stop squealing and I've wrung you dry
You fall asleep in my arms with a soft, breathy sigh.
A contest entry
- *~* Make Me Want You *~* (Erotica) by Shannon62875.
460 points, ended December 15, 2008, 8 entries
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Comments
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wow...this is very....descriptive...and intense. i think it very well suits the name of the contest
it really creates good imagery and was a good poem to read. 
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Wow! I thought you said you were shy...? This is a very good erotic poem. I love the details and I think you did what you set out to do for this contest. Good luck.
-Garrett
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Great entry......batwoman
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Thanks a lot for the nice words
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WOW!!
This was a really , really , really good write.. The part that caught my eye the most was...
Of rough, kneading hands and tiny love bites
Naughty little kitten in your soaked red tights
Peeling them down, I'm making you plead
But your pussy starves for my creamy seed
I mean wow... it just left me speechless... Its amazing and i couldnt ask for a better write!!!
You did a great job writing this...
KEep up the great work and good luck in my contest!
Shannon*Leah
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A very erotic and sensual write... left me sweating but only in the best sense of the word
Wickedly done, dear...
Ken
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WHEW!! This is very Hott!! I'm speechless!! Good luck in the contest.
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WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWEEEEEE!!!
OH MAN!1 LIP SMACKING ASS GOODIE GOODIE YUM YUM.. L.O.L. wow..uhmm..sorry lost it for a minute there! excellent, hot as an erupting inferno that out burns 'st helen's ' heat!!
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