how could you not kep that covenant
the promise was supposed to be forever
just like we were supposed to be
but you broke that like my heart
i want that covenant back
i also want my heart
cause you broke both of them
so ill put them back together.
all over
again.
Author notes
i thought of this as soon as i saw the contest.
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a Poem in 10 LINES or less (C) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended December 14, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
how you liketh work of mine?!
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hmmm interestin it was actually really good
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I loved this. It was short, but wicked rad.
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"kep" should be "keep" I believe
I like this, it has soul and I think we can all related to the sentiments; at least at some point in life.
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I like it 2 hugs up!!!!
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kinda random...but I like it.
~Alicia Lynn
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