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what i want for christmas (option 3)

for christmas i enjoy lots of little gifts
fun little things to play with
nick nacks and doo dads are all okay
maybe i can enjoy them when chrismas come around

my family will be there
they will have presents to
i hope i get that toy car i wanted for a long time
but if i get another pair of underwear i'll freak

i threw a major fit last year for a pair of socks
hopefully they will think twice before they do that again
i bet i get the most toys out of everyone else
because im a deserving boy

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  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    December 18, 2008

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    this was a nice way to think of this day honey best wishes to you in this contest


  • Yemassee gold member
    December 7, 2008

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    LOL, I wants lots of doodads for Christmas too...small and big...preferably big!

    I could use some underwear actually, but I still want gadgets instead!