I never want to see you again
I’ll never let you go
You said you would be my friend
I delve into esteems that are low
Can't you not see that I’m in Love?
Your taste and qualities is what I despise
My guidance comes from that above
Live this hell on earth if you know what’s wise
Calm this beauty that shares a dark heart
This pain is wretched, no goodness lives here
We live as one, no tearing us apart
My existence gone is what I fear
Reflected back is your black soul
Gazing towards you, reveals this light
Bear this burden, release this hold
Yet night and day we continue this fight
Living with this reprehensible mania
Reveling this sickness of Schizophrenia
Author notes
option #1- Wright about the picture what ever comes to mind when you look at it
Thanks for the inspiration ( a little odd but its what came out)
In a list
A contest entry
- picture me by eternalsol.
700 points, ended December 7, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
starting over - need your thoughts
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Oh my. This is some crazy stuff you have penned in here. I was really confused when I first read this and then I saw your final line about schizophrenia and it all made sense to me. So now that I look back on what you said I thought you did a good job of showing the push and pull that goes on when you're going through that kind of thing.
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Lol!!! thanks - I write some crazy things some time. This was one of them.
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nice we are all at war with ourself nice thanx so much for entering
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thank you for that O so true statement.
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