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Mmm!

Thunder quakes tremors
of delight inside your
majestic walls of majesty

As I set your ponderings
ablaze with seething licks
of rapturous luxury

Gracious for delicious treats
served me on a golden platter
of sweet ecstasy

Hot and dripping wet

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  • hotchocolate gold member
    December 12, 2008
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    I love this and you did what I asked for! Thank you for your entry and good luck


  • Blueskywonder
    December 6, 2008
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    Ooh lala... VERY EROTIC