Passage of time
Left you dangling and solitude
Debatable thoughts in your mind
Wondering what truth ever spilled from my lips
Cautious of others
Sealed this emotions that was carved
Never seeing another
While my image danced before your eyes
Missing ones presence
Holds firm as a blood spilled promise
Never forgetting that essence
That filled your heart with joy
I am here and will always
be
4 you
Author notes
Just thinking about being with those who I love and care for me as well
A contest entry
- please spare little time... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended December 6, 2008, 17 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
starting over - need your thoughts
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This is beautiful, your words, believe me they know you are there even if not physically, when you truly love someone you stand by them through alln not just the good times.Excellent write, thank you for sharing and keep them coming. Congrats on the silver.
raingoddess
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I love this one my friend
very touching.
Congrats on the SILVER
-CoCo
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Thanks Gorgeous - I started with a different rhythm and a expression
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Sometimes in life it is hard to always be there for those we love and care for, for whatever reason we might have to take a step back and the people that care for us may doubt that we are there for them or vice versa...just being able to let them know, a gentle word of reassurance is often all that is needed, to soothe the hearts of those that care. All in all a loving heartfelt piece
Congrats on the silver
Luv ~sweetness~ ♥
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This is a intimate story of the inside of yours making me touched here and there..thanks for sharing such a heartfelt piece..well done..
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Thanks so much - it really needed to be said to many that held strong to my friendship and pushed me back in. Thanks so much for your acknowledgment
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