You say you love me,
yet you like someone else.
Why did you let me go free?
When all I wanted was to be held close.
I fell,
Hit rock bottom,
Bled from a broken heart.
You had told me you love me,
Right from the very start.
Please say you love me,
Set your heart free to me.
You say i already have your heart,
But i dont believe i really have.
You go of out to the silly asbo,
When you should be attached to me,
The gypo.
This is not much of a love storey, wrong.
This is more of a song.
I cry out for you each time you leave,
I wonder if you hear me scream.
My love for you is that strong,
That i commit these crimes
To make sure you come home.
Yet i'm no where good enough for you,
As my names not Daryl.
Daryl does not feel deep enough in his heart,
To go straight from the start.
You know me from the begining
I don't like to lose, I like winning.
There is more than one path to take,
Yet you don't wanna put anything at stake,
You see gypo's always make life changing desision's
Which cause's all these complication's.
You already have my heart,
You have done from the very start.
So if there is ever a chance
Please just give me that last dance.
Say that you love me,
And together we will be free.
Author notes
7) You say you love me, yet like someone else
2) Love- Write about a love that didnt go as well as planned.. my boyfriend split up recently after dating for 3 years so i would love to read about that... Sad poems are my favorite!!!
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Comments
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This is a very good write... I really enjoyed reading this.. You have so much hurt and as i said... you cant love someone and like something else.. its just dumb and not right at ALL!!! You did a great job expressing how you feel.. keep up the great work and good luck in my contest!
Shannon*Leah

