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unguardened

with an eyeball rake
between my knees
i flounder
when the well is full

seems the indifferent
you feign in foreign
tongues is
off in search of
some small same

a seed of
soil the sully sowed
in grounds

unguardened


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  • Swan song gold member
    December 13, 2008
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    I sense a little cummings here! Well done


  • Cannonsfire
    December 5, 2008

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    Your mind is plethora of randomness and when it writes like this I just nod C

  • She Stole My Voice
    December 5, 2008

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    I absolutely love this.
    I can't pick out my favorite parts.
    Thank you for entering and good luck ♥