I look in the pool
A spring it could also be
A spring of blind filth
or insane purity
but who am I really
Am I the me i see in the pool
Or the me of which body this is
Black or white
labeled or controlled
A feeling some have
but have never told
So I just wanna know who am I now
Who will I forever be
Am I me
the one I am or the one I see
Which one really is me
Who do I really wanna be
Author notes
I need to credit so here it is......I chose #1 
A contest entry
- picture me by eternalsol.
700 points, ended December 7, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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ooohh!! lookie!!! another nice write from sun!!!
yay!
p.s. i'm really sorry if i haven't been talking to you or reading your writes in a while. i've been really busy! >< talk to you soon!!!
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Thanks for the comment!! Im so glad oyu liked it Choco.
p.s. Its ok, Im busy also and if you read my newest one youll know why im so busy.
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nice i like what you did with this option nice thanx so much for entering
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Your welcome, and thank you for letting me enter. And im so happy you liked it.
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