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Your Love

If I say I'm alright
is it enough for you
My arms are a sight
and you know it too

How could you love me
when I'm clearly broken
Why can't you see
I can't be fixed again

I just don't understand
how you could be different
That nothing you demand
what happens is meant.

That the pain I feel
can be forgotten
That all my wounds you heal
from heaven you're sent

What if I fall
would you catch me
Would you love it all
could you be free

If you say you can
then please be sure
Because I want a man
with a love that can endure

One to hold me high
and tell me they care
One that's not shy
and afraid to stare

The scars are me too
each and everyone
I wonder if you really knew
if this love would have begun?

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  • lost-angel
    December 5, 2008

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    i like this...i can really relate to it... from both points of view...i like that it's just thoughts...most of my stuff is like that too...


  • hatsuharu01
    December 5, 2008
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    Sorry this isn't one that I wrote and meant to put up. I just wrote it while thinking about things.

    All comments are loved.