In a world of rampant disorder
the people do seek some order
words that can make it right
words that define our plight
Life is wrapped in monetary funds
it is the way that has been chosen
and no there are no refunds
as the world falls into implosion
Now the book reads of these facts
that have all existed forever
there is nothing new in all mans acts
his disorders he shall never sever
This they would call the evil one
that simply does not fit in
as he throws the world into turmoil
someone shouts out it is a sin
Nature was fine without us
for we never did belong
we have really missed the bus
cause everything we do is wrong
It is no wonder there is no comfort
in this place we all call Earth
cause the only time you were an angel
was on the day of your birth
Author notes
2) How does spirituality fit into the picture? Does it have to fit into the picture?
A contest entry
- What do you have to say to the cynic? by RechercheCadaver.
1000 points, ended January 6, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow, a bit negative. I am not sure that I understood what you are saying here, who is the evil one? the cynic? but then it also seems to me that you are saying that spirituality doesn't fit into the picture. "Nature was fine without us
for we never did belong" are we not a part of nature? -
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I derive my conclussion by the fact that nature works in perfect balance without us. When you put man in this place it changes everything and balance no longer exists. Therefore I believe man is alien to this planet and not part of our natures cycle. Thank you for your interest.
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