Daddy take me with you,
I promise ill be good,
Please dont make me go there,
But my plea's miss understood.
Daddy take me with you,
Please dont make you go,
Mummy says i dont have to,
But daddy you still say no.
Daddy take me with you,
Cant you see im hurthing so,
Daddy i'll be a good girl,
Does my pain and fear not show.
Daddy take we with you,
Dont leave me with that bad man,
I'll help with all the house work,
I'll do all that i can.
Daddy take me with you,
No dont let go of my hand,
Daddy why dont you help me,
Daddy i just dont under stand.
Daddy take me with you,
I promise ill be good,
Daddy no dont say next time,
Listen to mummy she says i could.
Daddy i am sorry,
I love you and mummy very much,
What is it i do so wrong,
For you to let go of the hand that i do clutch.
Daddy dont make me go,
what do i do so wrong,
Why cant i be daddy's little girl,
Your aproval is all i long.
Daddy i am sorry,
I dont know what ive done,
But it must have been so bad,
Because into your arms i cant run.
Daddy dont let me down,
The way you always do,
Daddy please just do this one thing,
And ill do anything for you.
Just dont make me go there,
save me from your dad,
You are meant to love me,
But you just think i am bad.
Daddy it's too late now,
Daddy you have gone,
You've left me and i'm so scared,
I just wish i knew what iv done so wrong.
Daddy take me with you,
I'm begging one last time,
I'm looking up at you, eyes begging,
i look in your eyes, you look straight through mine.
Daddy, he has hurt me,
My life will now forever change,
But you dont understand it,
You find my behaviour so strange.
But daddy i'm not being naughty,
I dont mean to be bad,
Im sorry for all that i do wrong,
All the ways i make you mad.
Daddy i know im a disappointment,
That ill never be good enough for you,
But cant you just love me anyway,
Not treat me as you do.
A contest entry
- Make Me Cry by SeptemberFaith.
800 points, ended January 9, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I hope this doesnt trigger anything for any one. Please leave me a comment, good, bad, what ever you feel, just please be a little sensitive as they are all true stories about my life so farx
Comments
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"Cant you see im hurthing so," hurthing should be hurting. I think that you wrote a sad story, but I think it probably could have been compressed and made more effective shorter. A man should NEVER watch a little girl alone, I dont care what anyone says. The only man that should be left alone with a little girl is her father, and even that is up for question...
Criss
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