I need help,
I'm hoping for that comfort
you shall bring
with that answer
for my missing question
so hard for me to spell
so easy for you to notice
in that darken area
left alone in my soul
because all have change
nothing moved
day by day a hope
running for those words
ending what hasn't begun
acclaiming for what i need
please.. pretty girl
save me,
answer that one question i couldn't tell
and give me one only chance.
A contest entry
- lack of sleep by written-in-ink.
700 points, ended December 6, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
give me a full detailed critic, don't stop til you had said more than enough!!
Comments
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aww
thank you so much for sharing this with me
you did a really good job
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