Falling into the sky,
golden hair waving by,
I have failed but it doesn't matter if I have you.
The forgotten years,
the new life of joys and tears,
our love shall always shine true.
And if I shall die,
Before we kiss,
if you cry,
and it is me that you miss,
I want you to remember that although,
you may have said it was absurd,
From the very day we said hello,
something very special had occured,
The heavens above,
Would never have prepared me for this love,
and your cold remarks, oh boo.
They mean everything to me, now that you have said Adieu.
Author notes
This is a song for Zexion inspired from lae-fire's "Kingdom Hearts Love Letter (3)." Zexion went before demyx, and so, my-demyx writes something like an... ode? I don't know, but this is what he would write.
What do you think of this?
Comments
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Aww this is excellent! I love it ^^ The rhyming and flow is just PERFECT...
~Love Lae, Feu Tempete
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^_^ I am glad that you like it. Yay!
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The ryhming in this is really god not forced at all.I do believe this is like an ode and it is a pretty good expression of your feelings.Great job.
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Thanks. I think I do my best when I don't force myself to do something. ^_^
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