The gentle scent of sandalwood
I gaze into your sparkling eyes
You take my hand and we embrace
Upon warm sheets with hugs and sighs
Our skins share their warmth.
Your breasts press soft, your nipples firm,
Your nails press hard upon my back
My lips caress, you gasp and squirm
I stalk your secret garden
You breathe -- I feel you tense.
The sandalwood gives way to musk
Where arches, folds, and curtains pale
Escort my ladies pearl within
Your flower, amidst it's fuzzy vale
I nibble on your thighs.
While tickling your velvet hair
You smile as I peer within
Delighting at the softness there
I seek and find it with my tongue
Savoring the sweetness.
Your butterfly between my lips
How deep you breathe, I gently hum
You arch and pull me closer still
I feel your pearl upon my tongue
Your sweetness turns to honey.
A contest entry
- *~* Make Me Want You *~* (Erotica) by Shannon62875.
460 points, ended December 15, 2008, 8 entries
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All feedback appreciated! First entry here.
Comments
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Very nice sensual write. Soft and gentle, not too over the top.
Best of luck in the contest.
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softly sensual and as someone else said earlier, it leaves me wanting more.
thank you for entering.
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I liked the soft and gentle tone this was written in. Though it seems like it is unfinished as if it has only just begun. However, I think that this shows much potential. Would be a great addition to the challenge.
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Very nice. Sensual and gentle like plumes brushing over plums. Best of luck in the contest...alby
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wow that made me sigh! lol
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Happy to have made you happy!
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Very nice and beautifully written, the passion in it seeks softly through.
Thanks for entering!
Love, Raneika
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This was so wonderfully done. It wasn't so 'up in your face' like most pieces I encounter of this nature these days. I liked this, how pleasant and sweet it was, and how you managed to be descriptive without being raunchy. Excellent write and good luck in my contest!
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What a lovely write. A gentle hum did it huh?
Cheryl
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WOW!! This was a very intense write... Great job writing it.. Keep up the great work and good luck in my contest!
Shannon*Leah
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Actually, this was warmly sensual and filled with the gentleness of love... A truely beautiful write.
Ken
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