I've never felt so awake before
and I'm sleeping soundly
There's no one around
to wake the lighter side of me
this dream is all to real
you see
I cannot wake the nightmare
This lack of sleep is killing me
a monster I can't tackle
as I'm wide asleep.
A contest entry
- lack of sleep by written-in-ink.
700 points, ended December 6, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 2 prewrites a poet, you know you want to enter ^.^ by Kathraina.
800 points, ended October 16, 155 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Good rhyme flow here!
I like the concept you've used in this piece, I know a few people that this relates to quite well.
Bravo and thank you for entering
♥ Kate -
Ah..what a peculiar touch of the immagery you brought ..a thoughtful structure and wonderful impact as well..well done.
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i like it
nice take on the prompt
thank you for entering
and good luck
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