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why wont he stop?

Why wont he just stop for us??? I can’t take it anymore... I can’t stay with someone that does that and wont stop for us... All we are is asking him to stop for us and he wont...
I cry almost every night cause I don’t know what to do anymore with him.. All I want is to help him out and I don’t think it will help.. I wish he will just listen and work things out...
I miss him A LOT and LOVE him A LOT...!!!

what do u think about my poem?

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  • Tadd
    June 1
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    well writen

  • CMartin
    December 8, 2008
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    it portrays a ton of emotion, but who do you miss?


  • avidd
    December 7, 2008

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    this is a really good show of emotion I like it. sorry i haven't got any points but i would give this three if i could.


  • Tadd
    December 5, 2008
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    well writen

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