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cold night

On that very cold day in June we got together i was thinking of you in every way i could possibly find then one day in February i was sitting in that very same warm room and i was thinking of you in the very same way i was when you and i met. when I’m thinking of you i feel so safe (at times) and warm like your arms are tightly around me. when they were on that very same day. thinking of you makes me happier then happy could ever get. when your with someone I'm THINKING OF YOU! Dedicated to: Jeffery Age: 15 Love always: Alyssa Age: 14 Date: 11-7-06

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Jeff why

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  • avidd
    December 7, 2008
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    I know the feeling where something or someone is always one your mind. i have points now.


  • Tadd
    December 6, 2008
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    well writen