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broken

When i first saw you i liked you a lot. then in june we went out we went off and on for 5 months then October 12th came i was told you said it was over so cala called to make sure and you got load with her and hung up on her. i cried then called you back and your mom picked up and said something so i said tell jeff i said it is OVER! cause you treated me like crap i love you a lot but i cant deal with it i knew i should have done what my family wanted me to do. But no all I did was thought about you 24/7. Then you go behind my back and go out with a girl that was my friend. WHY? Well no matter what i will always love you. you are mine and only mine. Jeffy Poo. I just want to let you know i should of done what my family told me. But no I Loved you so much I didn’t lissen to them well my heart was fine until you walked in know its Broken and always will be Broken. Broken hearted for life. Dedicated to jeffery age: 15 Love always: Alyssa  Age: 14 Date: 11/6/06

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  • Tadd
    December 7, 2008
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    well writen