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ode to love

To witness of my thoughts of love
Chapter of the drunken eyes…

To circle of my drunken friends
Chapter of the loneliness…

To loneliness, the cloudless night
To cloudless night, the wilderness

To wilderness, the homeless ones
To homeless ones, full moon…

To moon, the sacrifice of love
To love, I crucified my self!

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  • Rovingone gold member
    December 10, 2008
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    Rather sad appeal to this poem. I like the last lines, best. Overall it is something that stretches the perception to hang on to.

  • wilnavan
    December 7, 2008
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    lonely...moo