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unspoken words.

i dont know
who to trust any more
my mind says one thing
and my heart says another

i wish i could tell you more
but i cant
the words just dont come out
i want to be your girl
like i used to be
i realy do love you

its just hard to see
when the time is right
i know we shall meet again
and then...

will those words speak again?... 

im just after a comment anything please ...

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  • love bleeds
    January 1
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    i love it!!!


  • B0b
    December 6, 2008
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    not bad


  • Horcrux.Breathing
    December 5, 2008

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    i love this its really good i know how this feels only too well
    i was thinking you could add a line saying somthing like:
    words that should have been spoken long ago silently roll down my cheeks
    ?
    tell me if you are going to use it