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Lovesong 4 You

I go to the cafe
where i will find you
looking up to see me enter
i sit down somewhere you can't see me
and fantasise
writing a note
or whispering in your ear
something like:

'...i'm as bent as a barbed wire knot,
seduce me, and
i will try
to forget your name
in the morning...'

Author notes

crush on a lovechild gypsy

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  • Maylette
    December 9, 2008

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    The ending of this poem is really powerful - I like that it is about forgetting them in the morning - a physical kind of crush as opposed to the more romantic kind I really enjoyed this unique read!

    ♦ M


  • charcoal
    December 9, 2008
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    love it (:


  • XXxFAKExXx
    December 5, 2008
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    kind of beautiful