I go to the cafe
where i will find you
looking up to see me enter
i sit down somewhere you can't see me
and fantasise
writing a note
or whispering in your ear
something like:
'...i'm as bent as a barbed wire knot,
seduce me, and
i will try
to forget your name
in the morning...'
Author notes
crush on a lovechild gypsy
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- Shh - Don't tell anyone by Suzanne Dia.
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Comments
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The ending of this poem is really powerful - I like that it is about forgetting them in the morning - a physical kind of crush as opposed to the more romantic kind
I really enjoyed this unique read!
♦ M

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love it (:


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kind of beautiful



