did deep breathing to unwind,
felt oxygenated abdomen
and abandoment of intent ~
already dreaming, hiss be heard
intimately triggering infant hygiene
kidney knocked down though
can't count toes with gout
but in big one size's lost baby...
overexercise neither recover myself
legs sided on bare trampoline:
bounced as unframed picture.
A contest entry
- lack of sleep by written-in-ink.
700 points, ended December 6, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please leave off good luck, unnatural emoticons, applause symbols...hypes
Comments
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this is a beautiful and deeply moving piece, are you speaking from personal experience?
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Amaranthine Lover I'm of that interest
thanks for sensing this involved delicately.
yes, I emboddied this piece and tried to not be typing until the type can be pictured but vice-versa
I'm glad for being brought back to the poem or that part of me,
Called Carolyn
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can't count toes with gout
but in big one size's lost baby...
overexercise neither recover myself
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love that part
thank you and good luck
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written-in-ink thanks with fine in finally okay
I'm happy I had come back to edit a bit more on what you quoted for enjoyment. It became my focal point, needing to level it not leave it lol as to change so about eating raisins in middle of night lol with dry goodness as dew dropping me to dawn feeling.
could relate to your prompt still but not good luck lately or training trends ~
called Carolyn
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